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Mighty ridge girders scrape into the heavens
Reaching

Warm breeze blows against its rivets and joints
Nothing

Mist settles on the foundation
Chilling

Golden sun blazes down on the steel
Baking

Vapor chased away
Cleansing

Innocence offered unconditionally
Understanding
Written for someone special.

Hopefully my fans can help me come up with a title.
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blinkingbeauty Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2004
I love this poem. always said that I loved how you could say a lot with very few words. although I think the last part is a bit out of place - maybe we can help each out when it comes to editing. =D but once again - GREAT job :nod:
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