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Mighty ridge girders scrape into the heavens
Reaching
Warm breeze blows against its rivets and joints
Nothing
Mist settles on the foundation
Chilling
Golden sun blazes down on the steel
Baking
Vapor chased away
Cleansing
Innocence offered unconditionally
Understanding
Reaching
Warm breeze blows against its rivets and joints
Nothing
Mist settles on the foundation
Chilling
Golden sun blazes down on the steel
Baking
Vapor chased away
Cleansing
Innocence offered unconditionally
Understanding
Written for someone special.
Hopefully my fans can help me come up with a title.
Hopefully my fans can help me come up with a title.
© 2004 - 2024 Ragnarok-Red
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I love this poem. always said that I loved how you could say a lot with very few words. although I think the last part is a bit out of place - maybe we can help each out when it comes to editing. 
but once again - GREAT job 
but once again - GREAT job